April had begun, but there was still a chill in the air and a hint of roughness to come.
Note: Foreshadow??
Also chilling was the early April breeze, which swept her hair back now and then, revealing her misshapen left ear.
Note: Important detail...
He was a born technician, possessing both the intense concentration of a bird sailing through the air in search of prey and the patience of a donkey hauling water, playing always by the rules of the game.
Note: Interesting image...a lot going on here...
He closed his eyes, turned his face toward the ceiling, and released a deep sigh heavy with suggestion and possibility.
Note: Best line yet...