constituent parts and just rewrite that slippery sonofabitch. The real secret here? Most times, you'll end up breaking the sentence in twain as if you were Solomon. One boggy, busted-ass sentence is almost always made better when it becomes
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sentence living together. And so, writing a good sentence isn't just about nailing one sentence, but about nailing the sentence before it, and after it. They live in colonies, these goddamn things, like
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myself. But look upon a wall with variety -- a photo, a painting, a swatch of torn wallpaper, a dead hooker hanging on a hook (that's why they call them "hookers")
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Simplicity yields to complexity. Each sentence, different in sound and content from the last. 17. Each Sentence Is A Gateway Drug Like I said earlier, a good sentence begets mystery. It makes you want
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